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Hate

 

Hardly Humble
Aggravated Anger
Terribly Treacherous
Evilly Exacerbating

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Written December 13th, 2004

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  • Jaden silver member
    February 21, 2005
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    mmmmmmm....doubly hateful...


  • Rawr Dinosaur
    December 21, 2004
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    i love this!! it describes hate very well- i wrote a poem about hate once and this kind of sums up my poem nice job and keep up the good work


  • Lo0opy
    December 18, 2004
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    Thanx Sam I'm computer-less at the moment, that would explain why it took so long to respond Anywho, sure ya can use this as an example
    Take care

    ~~T~~


  • Mannequin
    December 17, 2004
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    Brilliant how you used the letter twice in a sentence. I turned out really cool.


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    December 16, 2004
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    I have to say ditto with all the others, this is a wonderful acrostic, packed with emotion. Acrostics are pieces I can't seem to pull off to save my life! I love the emphatic words here, as it makes the eight words all that much more scathing. I wish I were better at these things, maybe one of these days

    I hope you're not pissed off at anyone...if you are, I feel for them

    Hope all is well!

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora

  • Purplerose
    December 16, 2004
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    Great

    This is cool, nice emphisis! I really loved this piece, acrostics are very interesting, I like your example! Cool work, I enjoyed it, very nice!
    Purplerose


  • Sandygram
    December 16, 2004
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    COOL POEM

    This was really wonderful. Quite different from the acrostics I've written. Thank tou for sharing. Take care, Sandy

  • this is love
    December 14, 2004
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    Hey.. Nice poem, keep up the great work.!

    xxx


  • Samplette gold member
    December 14, 2004
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    On, I love this twist on the acrostic. You did a great job with this. You know, I think you have triggered a contest idea for me...if you don't mind me using your write as an example...??
    I love it.
    SAm

  • Lo0opy
    December 13, 2004
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    Ya Sorry there were no pink bunnies included...just had a moment today that this came to mind....dunno...it happens

    ~~T~~


  • glazecovered
    December 13, 2004
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    You make cool acrostics! This one has all the right words that describe hatred and everything about it. Very well done, although I'm upset to see you writing about hatred rather than happiness and pink bunnies roaming about. I guess we all have moments like that.
    ~Anastasia

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