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Ridiculous Rhymes 14(Lancelot)

Weighed down by armor,Sir Lancelot
Definitely did not dance a lot.

Madly in love,Sir Lancelot
At Guinevere did glance a lot.

Very handsome Sir Lancelot
Did all maidens entrance a lot.

Very generous Sir Lancelot
Did fellow knight's lives enhance a lot

Lively showoff Sir Lancelot
He and his steed did prance a lot.

Not a good drinker Sir Lancelot
When imbibing lost balance a lot

Intrepid and impulsive Sir Lancelot
When in battle took a chance a lot


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Written December 13th, 2004

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  • Rhapsody
    November 20, 2008
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    Ha...lovely, but not much to me. Good job.


  • babyalah
    January 26, 2005
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    lol that was funny. well done

  • Citrus
    December 15, 2004
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    a happening write.

    what a man!.....so pleased you decided to write his biography, I think he would have been proud to see his exploits written down. I thank you for giving us this brief insight into his...errr, life.
    Thanks for the smile.....mmm wonder what happened to this trusty steed?....surely you must know.


  • December 14, 2004
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    Funny schtuff

    After reading of Sir Lancelot
    Laughed 'til I'd peed my pants alot.

  • a-crazed-hobo
    December 14, 2004
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    Witty, pseudo-bizzare and quite entertaining.
    I like it...a lot!


  • Lurie
    December 13, 2004
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    LOL that's great!!!! Thanks for the smile Bill! ~Laura


  • Parearoo
    December 13, 2004
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    Another masterpiece. I can't tell you how much I look foward the your Ridiculous Rhymes!! They always make me laugh some how ar another. Keep up the great work!!
    ----Later, Parearoo

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