I have a little secret
it shouldn't be revealed
I wish i could tell the world
but i can't
because it's my little secret,
the secret I will never forget.
This little secret
plays a big role in my life
he's got my heart all tied up
half the time i don't know what to do
he's always challenging my ideas
sure he ticks me off
but he's my little secret
the secret I will never forget
Don't tell Chris
but he's the best thing in my life
when ever I'm down
he cheers me up
he makes me laugh
and feel great again
i really do love him
but hes my little secret
the secret I will never forget
I could never forget him
he's on my mind quite a bit
the mention of his name makes me smile
heck he makes me smile
I wish i could have him
but i got a boyfriend and he has a girl
but he's my little secret
the secret I will never forget
His heart warms me up
so sweet and warm
i really do love him
so much.. he could never guess
I wish I could tell the world
show him off
make all the girls jealous
but hes my little secret
the secret I will never forget
Author notes
This is for bryan, I love him to peices, i wish i could have him but he has a girl friend and i have a boyfriend, hes one of my best friends.. and heros actually. Anyone who reads this may have the thought that i have cheated on Chris with Bryan but I havent.. its hard not to though.. I love Bryan soo much.. So Bryan.. this is to you
Written December 12th, 2004
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It's a cute piece!! Just to let you know your title has "wll" instead of "will"...not sure if you noticed that or not. I thought I would let ya know.
I don't like how it has like no punctuation...and parts of it seem a tad redundant, but it's a good write none the less.
"His heart warms me up
So sweet and warm
I really do love him. -
I think that was awesome!!! It was.. funny and a well kept secret! I wish my poems would be more like that! Keep up the good work!!!
Sincerely,
Silver-dove
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Ooo, intiguing, nice. Just goes to show we can't have it both ways though can we? Good poem
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