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Gentle Warrior

 

You’re one o’ many
   Lov’d to the leastly.
Your cry to Him
   Is most priestly.
Dear brother in Christ,
   Graced by your God,
      Stand in the peace
         By which you’re now shod.

 

I am so blessed
   By your fervency.
Your burning heart
   Has so taught me,
      Fail not to burn
         In holy prayer.
Throttle the dark prince
   With holy air!

Author notes

Written for my brother-in-the-Lord,Greg, a true prayer warrior, who has such a awesome gentle spirit, and is such an awesome example of a true prayer warrior.  


Written February 9th, 2004

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  • Molassis
    December 13, 2004
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    This must have been really encouraging to your brother in Christ! What an awesome way to pay tribute to someone who has inspired you. Well written and just a pleasure to read. *smiles* God bless you. ~Melissa

  • TinyDancer
    December 13, 2004
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    Once again, Im awed by your style. Its such a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!

  • pozo
    December 13, 2004
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    Wow, a lovely tribute- so beautiful and well written
    Thanks for commenting on my poem
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • Ashley Mosely
    December 12, 2004
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    what a sweet poem for him and a thoughtful tribute!

    ash

  • Gogetalife
    December 12, 2004
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    Wow,this is beautifull poem for your freind..i am honored to read such a thoughtfull work..good job my freind !

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