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Peter and Paul

Robbing Peter to pay Paul was a crime.
It was armed robbery,  now I'm doing time.    

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Written December 12th, 2004

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  • So much jam packed in to such a short piece! Proof that a good poem doesn't need length! well done

    Mylee

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 13, 2004
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    Thank you Sam for the nice comment, it was all I could think of last night, I was so tired from helping the grandkids decorate the tree. tree. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 13, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment, it is appreciated. Take cae, Sandy

  • Samplette gold member
    December 13, 2004
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    I remember the days of robbing peter to pay paul...a very clever and masterful escape.
    Great job.
    Sam

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 13, 2004
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    Thank you so much Kimberly for taking the time to read my poem and leave a nce comment. I appreciate your words. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 13, 2004
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    Thank you pozo, I'm glad it made you smile
    Take care,
    God Bless
    Sandy care,

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 13, 2004
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    Thank you Ann for the cheerful comment. You always start my day off with a . Thank you so much for the positive words. God bless you my friend. Take care, Sandy

  • December 13, 2004
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    Wow Sandy what a two liner this is, quite powerful my friend! But I'm still laughing at the title of the contest, great work! All the best in the contest and have a wonderful day. Ann
  • pozo
    December 13, 2004
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    Lol, this is funny and even in 2 lines you rhymed Great write, it made me laugh and thanks for commenting on my poem
    All the best,
    Your friend,
    Good luck
    Pozo

  • Butterfly Genie
    December 12, 2004
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    lol this was really funny and cute. good job. lol. Good luck on the contest hunn! Blessed be and best wishes.
    Love ~ Jess ~

  • Touchof1der Moderators member
    December 12, 2004
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    OOOhhhh... Ouch! Who hasn't experienced this one before? Great job! Good luck in the contest!
    ~Kimberly
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