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Just to be with you.

Emotions inside me stir.
My life is just like a big blur.
I think of you all of the time.
I'm not sure why but you are always on my mind.
I wonder if you think about me too.
But if you don't I wanna know who.
Who drives you crazy,
Like you drive me insane.
Who is it that causes your heart pain?
All I know is your the one who causes my pain.
Every time I see you the pain just gains.
It gets worse and worse,
Like a never ending curse.
I love you but I hate you.
I know you hate me too.
But I don't know what I can do.
Ill do anything just to be with you.

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Written December 12th, 2004

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  • rockstar queen
    January 1, 2005
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    Great

    Ahh great job..well done..i love this poem..i can relate..i really liked the line "Ill do anything just to be with you." I dunno why..just sticks out to me. ur really gifted. good write!

  • greeneyes37708
    December 12, 2004
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    Wow, what a great poem. It decribes a love that isn't there, but needs to be. Your on your way to being a great writer. Looking forward to reading more of your work