My Heart

my heart, broken
all alone.
coldness surrounds me
darkness and pain fill my body
my heart, broken
all alone.

my heart, mending
not so alone.
warmth surrounds me
light and happiness begin to fill me
my heart, mending
not so alone.

my heart, healed
never alone.
love surrounds me
peace and joy fill my body
my heart, healed
never alone

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I'm still working on this, but I would love comments
Written December 12th, 2004

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By me, right now

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Brokenpen
August 17, 2005
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your feeling showed thru this like a neon sign in the dark of night well worded and love the flow great job loved it.
Ankeeta
August 1, 2005
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reallly this works welll
I liked the way you written about heart breaking, mending and healing again....not many are succesful to reach till healing...but this short poems gives a nice inspiration ....few words here say a lot!....again the words "all alone, not so alone, never alone" in each stanza respectively are creatively used....because of them, the poem gets an extra shine! .....beatifully you have tangled the words

keep going
Ankita
suicidal temptation
July 25, 2005
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I liked this alot..it's as if your slwly curing..nicely expressed. I like how you use simple brief words that explain everything..nicely done..keep it up
GerardWay Is WayHot
July 10, 2005
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great
i really like this, its like i could see it happening..and it made me think
ThisIsMyWonderland
July 10, 2005
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Hey thanks for the comment, this is...wow..its so deep, and beautiful. Great job!!!