my love for you is so very strong
i think about you day and night
i know your out of my leauge
and that i could never have you
but i keep on dreaming
until one day i can
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Written December 12th, 2004
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this one is good...it has feeling...i can see how it would be better to break it up...but thats dumb that you werent able too
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thanks...tahts verynice of you
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well written.I like it.
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lol yeah...its good...great feeling, I think you could add a bit more...go deeper into your feelings...But i really do like it..its good!!!
this is what you said...you said it was too short...
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hmm...well thanks
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lol yeah...its good...great feeling, I think you could add a bit more...go deeper into your feelings...But i really do like it..its good!!!
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well...thats how it started out......like when i typed it...but when i submitted it....it went like that...i tried it twice!
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Nice sentiments here...though I think you would do good to break this up into phrases
Just a thought
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