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Epitaph

You promised me once,

That you'd create infinity,

and give it me,

In a heart shaped bubble,

So we could live it in forever.


. . . because i was afraid to die.


   Now i'm scared,

      I'm scared of the moment,

           You'll show me that bubble.

And you'll cry,
and so will I.

     You lips will part the question

               "Why"

       And i'll say

            "I'll never be ready to die."

I'm scared of Death.

             But Nothing lasts forever.

I'm scared of our death.

              Because I'm far to aware,

               That you're aware.

that
     we
           are
                 dead.  


And I shall always refuse.

          That our love lies there,

             Under the scribbled Mud,

       Were with a stick,

            As you held my hand,

                You dug in.

  " Here Lies The Only Faith I Ever Had"  

        You let to Opal tears fall upon that ground,

             and our hands slipped away.

    And then i slipped.


       Into my Alone laced Infinity

Author notes

This poem confuses me, its kinda twisted, amkes mo sense and skips. but HEY im in a weird mood
Written December 12th, 2004

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  • funeral
    December 12, 2004
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    and give it me,

    In a heart shaped bubble,


    this is soooooooo sad! but amazing, your getting better, i love this.


  • Titus gold member
    December 12, 2004
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    Brilliant!!!

    A really nice piece of affection, and a proud epitaph at that.