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love lost

The woman I loved
Torn apart by fools anew
Romeo where art thou now
I ask my self
The future lost in just a moment
Ideas and beliefs
Like water between islands
separate this love miles apart
And who am I to ask
Right or wrong
In the end all is left broken
And love shattered in desperate moments
Memories that break through defenses drawn
tears that well from with in
to remind us of what was lost

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Written December 12th, 2004

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  • vibiesh
    August 9, 2006
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    Comments comments let a comment of appriciation make your days better
    Wish you all the best
    with best regards
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