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my love for you is to strong for me to handle.

my love for you is to strong for me to handle.
i've poured my life into you.
here i am.
this is me.
this is my heart bleeding before you.
this is me down on my knees.
hoping you'll love me back.
what more can i do for you?
i tried everything.
i even cry for you.
you put me through so much shit.
so why am i here?
why don't i leave?
why don't i just drop dead?
will you notice?
will you notice me then?
probably not.
i am nothing 2 you.
i hate that you don't notice me.
or that you don't feel that same.


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Written December 11th, 2004

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