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Pain

The pain inside hurts so bad.
I don't know what to do.
to know you meant everything me,
Yet I meant nothing to you.
& the fact you didn't love me makes it even worse,
The pain inside grows more fierce.
I can't believe this is happening to me.
I thought we were always meant to be.
I guess you were just pretending.
you didn't even care.
But it use to feel so much better.
Just to know you'd be there.  

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Written December 11th, 2004

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  • Broken Princess
    December 12, 2004
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    i experienced hurt like this, hope u stay strong. well done xx