reckoning day
second death inferno
God's judgement
Author notes
revelations 20: 12-14
Written December 11th, 2004
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Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate it coming from a wonderful poet such as yourself. Being a new Christian (July was my rebirth) there is still so much to learn. Take care, Sandy
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There is a wonderful painting of which I cannot recall the artist or title that shows lost souls dropping off a mountain into eternal flames, that is what this haiku evoked in my mind. Very good imagery! Good luck with the challenge!
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Thank you Ann for your wonderful comment. I hope you had a wonderful weekend. I did some Chritmas wrapping as I listened to xmas songs and today we got our tree and put it up. Now all I have to do is wait for Santa.
Take care, Sandy
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Powerful!
Short and sad, but me hopes to make it in the air, and not down there...
Thanks for sharing Sandy, and I like the way you did this powerful piece! 
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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Outstanding!
Excellent! What I pleasent surprise, did not expect a haiku when I went to read this Sandy, you are amazing in so little words, you did it my friend, this is right on! All the best in the contest, it is outstanding in my book! Ann
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Thank you Donna for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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HA! This was cool. And I adore haiku
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Thank you Michael, Always nice to hear from you. Hope all is well wuth you. Take care, Sandy
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Very Good
Old news Sandy, but a good write. So little says so much. Keep up the great work and remember, don't play with fire.
Take care and God Bless.
Michael
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