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Even Worse...It's His

I'm having His child
and He doesn't even care
He says it's my problem 'cause He's with Jessica
And He doesn't need to be there
He says I can do it myself
That it's my fault it happened
And I dont even deserve any help

I don't even know what to say to Him
He has never been so heartless

I'm so fucking lost, I'm going to have a baby
And even worse, it's His
It wouldn't be so bad
If He would just do His part and help me

Someone tell me what to say to Him
I'm lost, scared, and alone

Because He knows what He did
I don't know what to do
I need Him to deal with this
'Cause I didn't get myself pregnant
And even worse. . . . it's His

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How can I make him help me with OUR baby? He has to deal with it too, it's not just mine, I can't knock myself up..... does anyone know what I can say to him????
Written December 11th, 2004

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  • -Hinoto Dreamer-
    December 20, 2004
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    DIE!!!!

    don't say anything....just kill him o.o


  • Ilati Aza
    December 13, 2004
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    You didn't climb on top of yourself and get you pregnant, darling. You should definatly let him read this poem, although it might not help, it might make him feel guilty. He needs to be apart of this baby's life, even if he doesn't want to be.

  • GothicChic2917
    December 13, 2004
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    But hes goin out with one of your friends, make his life hell anyways, but only if you dont care if she gets mad at you, and tell her about me being pregnant with his kid, and tell her he wont be a part of it etc..... I love you babe... and its 1am lol.
    love chels

  • forsakenlife20
    December 12, 2004
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    Chels im so sorry i would do anything for you but theres not much i can do and when this tyler kid comes to MY SCHOOL he is gonna wish he was never fucken born im gonna make his life come twirlen down and wish he was in hell becuz i wont take that fucken bull shit. hell no you know i can be a bitch im not that good of a fighter but i have a fucken mouth and a brain and thats all i need. I love you so much call me when you read this (if its at a decent hour) lol
    lov you ~sammi~

  • Killing Time
    December 11, 2004
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    "IF" this is real, and you seriously want to know what to do, I'll try to help..I'm not the best with this kind of stuff, but I'll try anyways. I think that you need to have a long talk with him and tell him that he does have his part in it and just because he doesn't want it, he has to. Tell him and make sure he realises how much his not being there during the years of growth of your child could really affect him/her when he/she is older. Tell him that if it won't do it for you, do it for the baby..your baby deserves his/her father. He can't be THAT cold-hearted, can he? I sure hope not.. Anyways, I did like this..not the fact that you don't know what to do, and that you're having a child with someone who won't own up to their responsiblities but the writing was good. I hope all goes well..let me know if I helped..I'd appreciate it

  • aliTa
    December 11, 2004
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    Wow! that's a good piece. did it really happen? OMG!!! I hope it goes well for you. dearly I do!

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