\You have captured my heart
Exposed it to all the love
The tears if I dare to run away
The anger if I were ever to lose you
My heart is beating beside yours
Creating music, one can only imagine
Feeling only your blood washing through
Understanding Every unspoken word said
Telling me tales to make smiles appear
I can't live a day without you..\
Author notes
"Winter Love" #2
Written December 11th, 2004
A contest entry
- !!!!!THE CONTEST?????!!!!!! by troubledgurl101.
400 points, ended January 26, 2005, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is really good it had a lot of feeling and i really liked this one well great job and good luck!
nicole -
This is gorgeous I adore the way that you have written about how you love this person and the effect that it has had on you.beautiful write
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great!
this is a beautiful poem, you should win the contest hands down!!!! -
i wrote it but it went lost as i tried to edit it...but now its added
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awe...this is so sweet..I can't live a day without you is my favorite line... this makes me think so much of the past...GREAT JOB!!! good luck in the contest!
but um....which choice did u choose?
XoXo
NiKKi
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