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Trapped

Reflection on the table tops
Van Gogh on the walls
Silence that could stop a heart
Echoes through the halls

Shadows dance on the ceiling
Curtains hang and loosely fall
Cracked and chipped paint hangs peeling
No sound breaks the incomprehensible drawl


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Written December 11th, 2004

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  • Endless Mind
    December 11, 2004
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    wow short but sweet
    keep up the great work!