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Someone help her

She sits in a corner.
no one to help.
no one to care.
they look at her as she cries.
they look at her....as if she's nothing.
she wonders what went wrong.
when the world stopped.
left her there alone.
why did this happen?
why to her?
why not someone else?
she can't change it.
only...only he can.
that boy.
that boy she loves.
they all know he hurts her.
but she comes back every time.
she needs help.
Someone to care.
someone to love her.
comfort her.
talk to her.
I wish someone would help...
me.

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Written December 11th, 2004

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  • HayHay
    December 11, 2004
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    WOW WOW WOW this didnt end how i expected it too i liked it even better when i read the last line maybe thats cause i feel your pain and my heart cries out to you i dont know but this was a great peom and very heart felt