Come, come,
Now it’s your turn!
Here.
Place your head here,
But do not fear.
Slice.
And done.
Death has come.
Your blood,
Splashing the ground,
Isn’t this romance?
Come, come,
Now it’s your turn!
Here.
Place your heart here,
But do not fear.
Splat.
And done.
Death has come.
Your blood,
Covering my hands,
Isn’t this romance?
Come, come,
Now it’s your turn!
Here.
Place your love here,
But do not fear.
Broken.
And done.
Death has come.
Your blood,
Painting your pain,
Isn’t this romance?
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Written December 11th, 2004
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I would feel honored if you did that! ^_^ thank you so much!
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you have an absolutely wonderful way of writng...
would you mind if i added you to my favourite's list? -
umm....heh heh explain myself? heh okay, well I guess...this poem when I wrote it I was thinking of showing the dangerous negative aspect of love. Using a guillotine metaphor to show people lose their heads and hearts and all in all in the end get hurt. .....I am bad at explaining what I write, does that help to make sense?
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*please write back* I don't understand. Are u writing about the pain that love and romance can cause? Is this the negitive that no one ever wants to talk about that u are stating? It's good it really is. But please explain to me. And read my poems not just the ones on my author page. Thank u.
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I have to smile at your author comments. You will find that there are as many likes and dislikes as their are members to this great community of writers. Personally, this is not my style. But I do admire the fact that your skill is diversified enough to write something of this nature. As for myself, my mind would not even go there.
I wish you many successes as you fine tune and hone your skills.
~Kimberly
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wow no way do i not like this! i love bloody romance!!! this was shocking my jaw seriously dropped and my eyes bulged in the stanza when i was thinking how sweet place your head here do not fear... then slice! i was like WTF?! it was warped and it was great. keep it up!
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I like it..........
so, please write me about what you think, be honest, if you hate it that is okay but please say why!
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