A person fit for each religion
Only to find the path of truth
Being secure because of faith in the dark
Understanding the purity and energy within
Impossible for the unbelievers
If you believe there's air when its unseen
Then why not believe there's a god if there's faith?
To question a soul, it only speaks what it feels
To find him there letting you choose your paths
Helping for the judgement day approaching
Knowledge only blocked by the devils play
Choice remains in your hands
Author notes
well....yea a poem about religion
Written December 10th, 2004
A contest entry
- A question of Faith by Wolfpoet.
500 points, ended January 30, 2005, 15 entries
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Interesting, although I'm rather disapointed in how mmaxx7 dragged out the information on your faith, I'm glad it's made clear you follow Islam. In England Islam is probably the second biggest faith next to christianity and I have studied much of the beliefs and views of Islam. This poem is a very good reflection of your faith and in my studies of Islam I have found it to be in many ways more true to the original ideas of christianity than many evangelists and born again christians. This poem is heartfelt and to the point, a very good poem.
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air is physical but u still cannot see it...look this is what i believe.. you cannot see god though he is all around you...so does it mean you have to see something to believe in it?
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As I read the comments you are Muslim, I enjoy learning about religion but as others have said the air is physical how can is religion physical, I am atheist but interested in the knowledge. Good poem too.
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I feel where you are coming from. I am glad you took the time to write about your experience with God.
May God the Father bless you this New Year.
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well...i dun think other then my views that my religion was playing a big part...there might be many religions that think the same ways so why don't they look at it through their own eyes then me jus sayin this is only a muslim's point of view..
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wow, chill man... i just wanted to know what your religion was
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Ok....you know wat i am proud to b muslim..but i dont choose to wave the flag around...wtf is this so important to you...about what religion im from?and you know what you dun have to like the piece i dun give a damn about if u canre or not...i didn't put it in ur face and tell you to read it so why dun you jus f off
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Krishna? Scientologist?
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LOL, concealing your religion, hillarious in its ridiculousness.... you are too funny.
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there are other religion than christian...im not gonna tell you my religion and you dun need to know but i am not christian...but my religion is close to it
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What are you then? A Jehovah's witness, a Mormon? You are something Christianish, don't give me that crap. Your poem is a classic reflection of their views.
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how is it only offered by only christians and jus to tell you im not christian, and im not sayin you have to believe in god...and im not about to preach to u about religion and tell you the rights and wrongs...i believe every human has their own decission to believe or not...
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Decent
I don't like the message, but it's pretty well written. The analogy about the air is a classic case of a false analogy as offered by many Christians. Air, unlike God, passes through my lungs, it rushes past my face when I ride in a convertible, I can sense air, I can smell it and I can touch it just by waving. God, on the other hand, has none of these qualities. And if he does, I as hell am deficient in some sense as yet undisclosed to me. -
I'm a christian myself. I like this poem.
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truthful
very truthful although this seems like prose but good i like it
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