An unsuspecting victim walks along
They don’t realize anything is wrong
Many eyes are watching, waiting to strike
Just waiting for when the moment is right
Suddenly she strikes at this little fool
He doesn’t realize the web was a tool
His own foolishness got him in this sticky mess
But now, in her stomach is where he will rest
Now the spider scurries up her clever trap
It will soon be dinner after an afternoon nap
A little silvery cocoon holds her squirming meal
As he slowly dies, he lets out a scared little squeal
Author notes
I wrote this in seminar (a study hall sort of class) a few days ago. I think it's stupid, but I thought I would post it anyway.
Written December 10th, 2004
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Actually I'm with you, I hate and am scared of spiders and most insects (besides catepillers). I was just sitting there and then I saw this gross dead spider sitting on the empty desk next to mine and then this weird little poem came to my head.
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nasty..i hate spiders..i don't even know why I clicked on this yeah, i have a bad phobia for spiders
But aside from that..I really don't think it was stupid!! If anything It was descriptive and had NICE imagery..and seems like your alittle eduacated when it comes to spiders..and bugs. This was awesome and interesting. lol
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I don't think it's stupid, but I wonder if it's about an actual spider or if it has enough irony to uphold human traits? Anyways, its a good description...seminar? is your school christian?? if not I'm sorry for the mistake. Good job
-Skyelle -
It is not stupid! I like it! I like how you descibed it! It, like, zo roxx!
Eny
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Superb
I'm glad you used study hall time to concoct this marvelous tale of a spiders victory and its victims untimely demise. I love the presentation and playful manner you instill. Sometimes, its what we think stupid becomes the greatest work. Well done. Keep writing. The talent is obvious.
Mac
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