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For A Grand Birthday

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E
xquisitely with a yawning heart,      
t
enderized by passage of time.
ephemeral gladness of your youth,
replaces all past acts of crime.

nudging its way into your thoughts,
a
rdor supersedes the pain gone by.
lavishing you with a gentle comfort,
I
mbued by tears you'll no longer cry.
captured in a moment of brumous dreams,
echoes of laughter no longer cause you dread.
Q
uivering from a spirit that teases,
u
nconcerned of shadows malingering ahead.
e
xpelled is the terror you once beheld,
ejected happiness is subtly on display.
necessitating you to accept from your friends,
 ~best wishes for a grand birthday.








hugh wyles  made a comment on Your Grand Birthday
'Dear Sam,
I don't know Raven Aurora other than from her writings and I learned from these that she has had a far from easy life. Your poem underlines this and would seem to be a very fitting tribute to her as I'm sure it is.
As a poem it is very well written indeed with some adroit usage of words (I love "brumous" = wintry, foggy, and will try to use it in conversation to impress my friends!).
A well written birthday poem and a delicious looking cake.
Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.'.
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  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    December 11, 2004
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    How did I miss this one?! Am I really so lazy as to not keep up with my friends... or is it just because you post a million times a day? lol I adore this, and am going to print it and post it on my wall to keep as a reminder that not only do you care about lil' ol' me (and many others) greatly, but also a prayer that the next year will be a much happier one filled with light and hope. You always inspire me, whether the subject matter is me, another person, an experience from your own life, etc. You are truly an earth angel!

    And Lord knows, I would be completely hopeless without you and a few others. I believe this is why we met here.

    The tears are gone now, replaced by smiles.

    ~love you always~

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • queenie
    December 10, 2004
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    you said it best for all of us.a grand birthday for a grand gal.this is so precious.your capacity to love grows larger everyday.


  • hugh wyles silver member
    December 10, 2004
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    Dear Sam,
    I don't know what's going on but I already commented on this poem and applauded it.Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.