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My heart bleeds

My heart bleeds because this love is untouchable

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crushes in high school
Written December 10th, 2004

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an official invitation to join my own one-liners contest listed under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. I hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feel free to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).

  • mysticriver
    December 10, 2004
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    This is very good. It is deep..though it is one line.
    Good Luck.