Take this kiss upon your lips
and feel my hands against your hips.
For this much I can tell you true—
that all I say and all I do
brings my thoughts back home to you.
In all my waking thoughts, it seems,
in all my visions, all my dreams,
with every uttered breathless sigh,
as every minute passes by,
the only name that I can find
within my heart, within my mind:
Sherry! Sherry! Whose kind, sweet face
warms me in a special place.
Sherry! Sherry! Whose loving touch
I seem to crave a bit too much.
Oh what have you done, you sweet, sweet soul,
with the man I used to know?
For he has gone to hide away
in thoughts of you all of the day.
How did you come to be so pure?
What is this fine, divine allure
that pulls me in, makes me secure?
Must all I say and all I do
bring my thoughts back home to you?
Author notes
For my sweet baby girl ...
Written December 10th, 2004
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Awww, such loving words flowing from your poetic heart
This is really beautifully written, makes me wish my guy was poetic and would write lovely things like this for me.
A wonderful job with writing, rhyming, flow...all that and more.
Luv and
Dee
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awwww that's such a sweet poem! here i am looking for a nice little scary poem, and ya go and write about love. this just goes to show what a multitalented individual you are! been a little while since your last post, nice to see back again
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this is sooooooooo sweet! I have really read way too many muchy gushy love poems today that were really good cuase now i'm a basket case! Thanks for adding to my tissue time! lol jk. this si a really sentimental piece that I admire! great job on this piece and keep up the great work!
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Very good and Gave Me A Warm Feeling Inside.
This poem makes me smile. The flow and use of the words add to the successful outcome of your poem. Plus adding your own heart and soul into it can be felt by your readers as all the others above can't help but say, 'aww'. -
BEautiful piece I love it! This is refreshing after reading 100 cutting suicide pieces! Thanks for bringing back out that deep hole that was starting to appear in my soul! Excellent job!
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AAAAWWWWWWw, so sweet, great write, so so sweet its giving me a toothache.
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The flow and rhyme in this poem was nicely done. Your words are so sweet and loving I am sure she adores this. thank you for sharing
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW ... so sweeeeeeet i must say it's a great poem ... the rhymes are great everything is great in it i must say ... but no one could ever heal the flame in the depth of my soul !!!!.. keep on the good work ..
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Awe, so beautiful. A tender ode to someone you love. I really enjoyed reading this, it's so nice when people can express how they feel about somebody through musical words.
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nice write
Awwww this is a sweet poem! Great job!
XOXO
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AAAAWWWWW! I wish my boyfriend could write something like this for me... This girl is a very special person it seems to have someone like you to write for her. All I can say is awww because this is so sweet and so cute. I really liked reading it. Thank you so much for sharing this.
-Much love
-Kayla
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