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a lie

and to think you ment what you said

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sad
Written December 10th, 2004

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  • fall into me
    December 10, 2004
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    i like this. about entering 'i love you' i'm gonna have to say no. three's the limit. you've got some good stuff. though. thanks for adding me to your favorites!! so appreciated

    <3 fall