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I'm asking pretty please, with lips as red as cherries on top.

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Written December 9th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an official invitation to look into and join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feel free to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).


  • forgotten dream
    December 14, 2004
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    really cute - i like the imagery it brings to mind, as well as teh voice i can see saying this ^_^ best of luck in the contest <33