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A Token Of Injection

I did not
Want a shot.
It hurt a lot.
A balloon was all I got.

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circa 2000-01
Written August 16th, 2002

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  • Flaming Sky
    February 18, 2004
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    E for effort ;)

    Hm... that's deep.
    I like your rhyme, anyway.

  • Secret Sue
    November 24, 2003
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    well dosen't that suck? damn ballons...
    xoxo
    Mandy SUe

  • Sprocket
    August 21, 2002
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    neutral

    'Placebo helps Rejection'

    mine did not hurt a bit
    until I had to sit
    next time you get a shot
    be sure to ask for a lollipop
    preferably in advance
    to give the sugar a chance

    :)

  • Celtic Lykos
    August 17, 2002
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    excellent

    Geee, all I got was a sucker... ^@.@^


  • silica silver member
    August 16, 2002
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    excellent

    Q Ah there's another...

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