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Holiday Wishes

HOLIDAY WISHES ACROSS THE MILES

The holiday season is here
time to decorate the tree,
hang a wreath on the door,
for the carolers to see.

Wishing a Merry Christmas,
full of yuletide cheer,
though miles separate us,
in our heart you are here.

Rejoice this holiday season,
celebrate in Jesus birth,
count all your blessings,
pray for peace on Earth.

To celebrate the season,
we send our love to you,
so have a Merry Christmas,
and a Happy New Year too.

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Written December 9th, 2004

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  • Sandygram
    December 10, 2004
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    Thank you for the wonderful comment. That was so nice of you. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Dec 10, 9:40 because ''.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 10, 2004
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    excellent~

    I really liked this
    I think you should contact a greeting card company
    Also nice to meet you and hope ya come visit me too
    Good luck in the contest
    Susan~~~

  • Sandygram
    December 10, 2004
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    Thank you so much dear Chris. You started my day out with a smile this morning with your wonderful comments. . Thank you so much. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    December 10, 2004
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    Thank you so much for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy


  • Tiana
    December 9, 2004
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    I would buy this card for my friends and family; it was indeed very well written. I hope you have the best Christmas this year, and let it keep getting better from here on out. Keep up the good writing!

    -Tiana


  • December 9, 2004
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    I hope you too, may have the best yet ever Christmas my friend, and a bright new year too. Global wishes like these are indeed an inspiring treasure for all who read and share among friends.. Christmas Huggers


  • Sandygram
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you so much Steff, I always love hearing from you. Your comments always make me smile. Love, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you Kimberly, I appreciate your wonderful comment. I always enjoy hearing from you. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate your kind words. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you Tamara for your wonderful comment. God bless you my friend. Take care, Sandy


  • Touchof1der silver member
    December 9, 2004
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    This is beautiful Sandy. I think you have the whole greeting card format down pat. It flows freely and fills the mind with wonderful images of the season. Great job sweetie! Good luck in the contest.
    ~Kimberly


  • Sandygram
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you Sam for commenting on my poem, it is appreciated. Take care, Sandy y


  • Sandygram
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • Samplette gold member
    December 9, 2004
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    Great rhytmic flow. A perfect beat for a greeting card. I enjoyed it very much!! thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • FifthDove
    December 9, 2004
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    This is a wonderful card.
    I would buy it* *
    Great job
    Bo


  • Ladybug
    December 9, 2004
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    happy Hainuka

    I bet Halmark would love to have you on board
    you did a great job sweetheart
    there is a web site you may be interested in looking at called
    inspiredbyJesus.com
    it will explain all the neat stuff you can be published on.
    Tamara


  • AnotherFace
    December 9, 2004
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    Aw sandy!! I love it! its so sweet!! Rhyming is great, as awlways. Flow is smooth, just like all of the others. You never seem to dissapoint me with your poems, you're so very talented!!

    <3
    Steff


  • PoeticMuse
    December 9, 2004
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    Well Done!

    Aww this is a very sweet Christmas card. It flows very well. It's so full of that which gives most people hope in this season...love Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!

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