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Christmas

Carols, which dance through the air.
Hope, which has been given to us by the Christ Child.
Rich chocolates, in which we usually never indulge.
Instant gratification when a loved one opens a gift from us.
Stars shining brightly upon the treetops.
Trees lovely decorated for our eye to behold.
Memories of Christmases long ago and the ones we make this year.
Anticipation of what Santa may bring to each one.
Snow we desperately wish to blanket the ground on Christmas Eve.

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Written December 9th, 2004

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  • Sas55555
    August 29, 2006
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    This is a perfect summary of why I love Christmas.Thanks for putting me in a holiday mood.
    Hugs,
    Sarah

  • hellsskater16
    April 5, 2005
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    wow! i dont know if you remember me but you wrote to me a while back on my spring poem sorry that i haven't writen back in so long... i haven't been on in a while.. your poems are really good.. they are really unique. Ill be writing more now that i have a computer again and im sorry bout your parents and grandparent im still younge so i dont know what its like to lose someone thats taken care of you your whole life ounce again great work!!!!!


  • ColinSJones
    December 13, 2004
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    this will be the one u mentioned i like it and you did have the real message of Christmas in there


  • SuZyCuE
    December 13, 2004
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    This is great. Very creative :-)

  • xAnonymousx
    December 12, 2004
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    This is a cool poem...I think its called an aristocat..or acrostic..Those are very neat and take creativity. Very cool. Well done


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 11, 2004
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    BEAUTIFUL POEM

    I love this Christmas acrostic. It is so full of wonderful imagary. You have captured all the wonders of the season. This was a joy to read. I have my Christmas songs playing so this is the perfect poem to read. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sansy.

  • mysticriver
    December 10, 2004
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    hahaha..I just did see your edit to this comment...lol...silly...you are as bad as me...
    thanks...again

  • DevilsWrongHand
    December 10, 2004
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    nice write

    Nice little poem here! Keep up the wonderful work!
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • December 9, 2004
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    This is a really good acrostic... the last line hit me because i now live in the desert no snow... although I have no problem with the not having to wake up early to shovel it lol. Very cute and well done

    ~~Jessica Erin


  • shiggins
    December 9, 2004
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    This seems more like a list of what you love about Christmas. Nevertheless, I liked how you pulled it off. This describes the holiday season wonderfully. Great job, and keep on writing.
    ~Chris
    [edit]Oh crap. Didn't realize it was an acrostic. That makes it even better. [/edit]
    Edited on Dec 09, 2:19 p.m. because ''.


  • tanzanite
    December 9, 2004
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    Very good

    Lovely description of my favorite time of the year. I enjoyed this a lot.

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