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But if my heart has been cold for so long, how can I trust the warmth you bring?
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Author notes
One last try for this contest, although I must say, I really enjoyed this one line stuff. 
Maybe I'll try some more later on..Even if I don't win anything, I'm glad just to learn something new!
Written December 9th, 2004
A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you might find my poem "Frostbite" kind of interesting. this little one-liner made me think on it.
a frozen heart can melt before a warm love and tenderness. -
This is amazing. I'm just wondering how something so short could pack such a powerful punch. This was very strong. I really liked it. It sounds like it should be a song lyric or something. You've done an amazing job with just one line. I don't understand how people could put emotion into something that's only one line long then I read something like this and it completely changes how I feel about one liners. You did a wonderful job! I shall now check out your other contest poems and some of your other stuff.
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Brilliant, this one read much less awkward then the last one and it also had a strong feel to it. Good job
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