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My light is becoming so dark.
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Author notes
Another try at this one line thing..I'm liking it.
Written December 9th, 2004
A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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the secret to a one-liner is to either make it striking as an image or make it striking as a metahpor. this doesn't actually accomplish either. i've seen this sentiment expressed many times throughout my life in various ways.
there is a variety of haiku that's written as a single line:
lights go out and, and for a moment, everything is vividly clear
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