I will no longer bleed for you...for I'm no longer yours.
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Written December 9th, 2004
A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
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Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an official invitation to join my own one-liners contest, whch you can find under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
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Hey awesum write
U sound really cool. Anyways I can relate alot.. Except i still cut over the person.. Ur a really good writter - keep it up! 
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It's good for you to finally say that you will no longer bleed for someone who has no hold over u
well done
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Hmm. Interesting..Yet, I've known people to still bleed for a person, long after they're gone..Saddening..But this is a good one line. Sad, yet happy at the same time, it's good that you're no longer letting your blood flow for someone that might not have deserved it...if that makes sense..-Yawns some.- Sorry for my ramblings.
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