I hear you, I'm listening,
I believe in your songs of love
Your pounding heart, beats angel's art,
that falls from up above
Your invisible voice, soothes my soul,
painting vivid, golden memories
I watch you dance, with sweet romance,
that puts my heart at ease
I knew of you, before you spoke,
as your presence I felt strong
For I have found, a flame that shines,
within your precious, love song
Let love be life, let life be lived,
as you embark through candy dreams
As you softly soar, forevermore,
I hear you play upon my heartstrings
Caressing me, with heavenly chords,
my breath you take away
I find each note, divine you wrote,
that heals my yesterday
Like melodies, that cry for hope,
and sing sweet poetry
I've been touched, with love so much,
for you love me for me
Author notes
Thoughts I Jot! Thanks for reading me, I appreciate ya!
Written December 8th, 2004
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Such a romantic you are...you touch everyones hearts that read your work and make us all long for love so pure and true...I love the soft beautiful flow and deep feelings throughout, yet the ending was my favorite. It came with a sigh.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful heart and soul with us all.
Best to you, my friend.
mystic
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This is very pretty. The only part I don't understand is "as your presence I felt strong". I loved "Your pounding heart, beats angel's art that falls from above" What an image! Very intense. The only other part, IMO, is the part about candy dreams, it's sweet but for me it takes away something and maybe changes the color of the poem from like, fushia to soft pink. Does that make sense? I love it though it's very full of passion and beautiful lines that really grab your attention and paint a picture. Good job
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this si brilliant
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This is the best love poem i have ever read because as the reader reads this they're taken back to their own memories of love. Amazing wrk!!!
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I loved this one. I wish I could find someone
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that is absolutely trully amazing....im lost for words..
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This is beautiful and so well written. Also, congrats on getting the 2nd most comments that I've ever seen! Great job!
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Its a wonderful feeling when someone loves you for you!!! Great write!! She sound's like a keeper!!! ~Sukie
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Wow!! That was written beautifully!! My favorite part was, "I've been touched, with love so much,
for you love me for me." Isn't it a great feeling?!?! To know that someone loves us for who we are!! Again, this was beautiful!! -
I hate being one of a crowd but my first instince was to applaud.
Tecohe -
great poem
Beautifully written! So gentle, expressive and full of love and devotion. Thanks for sharing and Keep up the good work!
God is blessing you!
Dawn -
Wow...just WOW. This is SO beautiful. The feeling I got when I read this poem made me not want to stop reading! The italics made the poem have a somewhat dreamy feeling, plus the flow was very smooth, so I felt as though I was dreaming away upon a cloud. A nice feeling, mind you...
"Like melodies, that cry for hope,
and sing sweet poetry
I've been touched, with love so much,
for you love me for me"
Absolutely beautiful. Amazing job you've done on this piece. No wonder you have so many applauds, for you deserve each and every one. Plus one, mine! *Applauds* Thank you so very much for sharing.
Elizabeth
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Good Job!
well... you get my automatic approval because you used my favorite ryhme scheme so... lol Good job with this write i like the feeling from this poem. Makes you want more of the same. Good Job! -
You did a tremendous job writing this poem. I'm not going to waste space saying how great of a job you did. Suffice it to say, your work is excellent.
My one quibble is the italics. Writing something entirely in italics makes for a very hard read. -
this is really good!!!!!! Its so beautiful!!!! GREAT WRITE!! can you read mine? plz?
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great!
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wow I love it...
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Wow... I can see what all the applause is about. This is a really awesome poem. It has a regular rhyme scheme, and yet it diverges from a normal one, and it forms an original, if you get my drift. It's hard to explain, but yeah. This poem shows a lot of emotions and imagery, as well. You really know how to write poetry. Not only can you keep me reading through rhythm and structure, but your words are beautiful and paired all too perfectly. I can feel your thoughs within my own mind, and I know what you are feeling. Much props, my friend.
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This is an overall smooth and sweet write. It made for a pleasing read. In fact some of the lines are quite slick and meaningful. I could critique a few minor read speed irregularities, but I suppose the sacrifice of form was for content. Overall the trade off seems to have paid off. Kudos!
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i like how your poems rhyme and dont seem pushed at all..and the ones i have read are all so nice..very sweet and beautiful..nice..i love it again!
psycho -
Lyrical
What a lovely write, I could hear the music playing on the heart strings. May the harps of the angels and the elders play, upon the sea of glass mixed with fire, the song of Moses and of the Lamb, in through and around you and your family's lives. Thank you for your beautiful poem, keep on penning. Your friend, Heather -
i literly love this poem i feel it so much even know when me and my dude fights and we can through problems i know that something is there like this like he loves me for what i have and not because of what my hair looks like or what ever he is great and your a great pooet keep it up great work fo real
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way great poem love it lots!!!!!!!!!!!
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that is beautiful, and wonderful! and amazing! and moving all in one!!! be proud of this piece! it shows the true beauty of love! welldone! its so genuine and just flows on the page so well!
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You have my support
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This was breathtaking...
-Ash,
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So this is where all the applause guys are hanging out???? Good Lord, you didn't leave any for the rest of us.
Well, in hindsight, this was pretty good and probably does deserve the praise that it got. If I had an applause left over, I would add my humble one to the others, as well. -
What a wonderful feeling to be loved for who you are, what you are. It is something we all strive for, but sometimes it is so hard to do. When we get this wonderful love....it isn't always as easy to accept as we might think. Very good poem.
Cheryl
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Speechless, completely speechless.
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i'm in awe.this is why you are a weaver of poetry.it's like each line is an intricate thread of the finest fabic and they are painstakenly woven into this poetis quilt of passion.you haven woven words in a literat taperstry.
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Inspiring
At first when I read the title to the poem, I thought it could be a little cliche, but then I actually read it, and my gosh, that was amazing. I loved how you described every last thing about this angel and you made it seem so real and vivid in my mind. Whatever inspired you to write this.. i hope it happens again, because my gosh, you have a gift. Don't ever lose that, and I hope to read more of your works soon. -
Wow this was mind blowing. I have tried to ryhme and well lets say. . . . i need more practice. i really loved it sooo much. My goal for the new year is to either get a lot of applause on a poem or win a contest like gettin 3rd or 2nd. But seeing this poem gives me hope that i can write something wonderful.
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Wow. Amazing. This was so perfectly written I could hardly believe it. I had to read it twice and then I read it again just because I wanted to! Excellent rhyme! I have rarely read poems with such wonderful rhyme schemes. Every word seemed to fall in place just perfectly, as if it were meant to be. Such a sweet poem too! Thanks for sharing this, it really made me smile.
Keep up the good work!!!
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Magical
Such a magical write, your words lie gently on the page, just dripping with love for all to see.....Thanks for sharing, truly an amazing write, there are really no words to give it justice. well done!!! -
STANDING OVATION
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wow.. um.. i dont know if i allready commented on this since theres so many posts.. so ima do it again.. lol. this was amazing.. very heartfelt and so much passion.. i mean i wish i i could write like this.. hm.. nice job.. it flowed very well and the rhyme was geniously put.. very good job and may you always be well...
Adnan -
This one is amazingly well done. To feel the angels touch is the most beautiful feeling you can have. I know for on and off through my life I have felt them. They're always around me and they are guiding us each. Thanks for sharing this very well written poem. ~Bud~
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Angels are all about
When we find them out
The miracle
Is lyrical
That is
Without
A doubt
This is sensational and I am going to gather others to read this so that the poem that bashes Jesus keeps fading behind yours. I am new here! Poems like this, is one of the reasons why I stay!
~mt~
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great job keep it up i want to read more like these.
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praiseworthy love...praiseworthy poetry!!!
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beautiful
This poem was a inspiration to me, my poems tend to be the opposite, for I have an angle, but she is not my angle, she is her own. -
Nice
It is a wonderful theme and the content is really satifying, really good. I'd be obliged if you read my poetry too. Good work. -
i am glad that u have an angel and happy u have someone to talk to when you need someone.good job on chooseing words and on the voice of poem.
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this is absolutely beautiful!
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great piece of lit. !
im so glad that you have found something like an angel.. i could sure use one of those right now. what i would give... to hear the voice of an angel, to tell me everything is ok and there is nothing to worry about. but of course that hath not happen, i am alone, lost, and confused.. my hopes are bruised. i dont know where to turn when i cannot feel teh presence of God... but i am so happy for you. so glad that you have that relationship with God the father, and you can feel the angels.. you have been truly blessed and i love to see others blessed in this way, again i am so happy you feel the presence.. you are an AMAZING author im sure you already know and dont need another comment from someone like me, but i just want you to know that this must be the best poem i have ever read by someone not yet published, it is a FANTASTIC write and i sincerely hope you get somewhere with your writing. thank you for being an inspiration.. mayeb with some prayer teh Lord will speak to me as well.. i pray he does. again, GREAT PIECE OF LITERATURE!!! -
it was beautiful!im speechless!
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*Jaw drops*
This was absolutely gorgeous. I felt like I could have floated out of my chair while reading this. Thanks for writing such a beautiful poem. I feel honered to have read it. You're a great poet... keep it up! Good luck in all you do! -Kim -
very touching
I can't help but think of the Beetles when I read this poem. Maybe it it the bit about love being life and life being lived.
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I find this a bit exhilerating. Its just such a happy poem! And obviously its quite popular.wow
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Wow, this is very deep and very moving. Spiritual. I'm not much of a spiritual person, but I really like your writing style and content here. Very interesting. Keep up the good work!
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realy good
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Wonderful
This has a deeply calming influence....it is something I would love to read every morning on waking...I salute you on a beautiful poem that you should be so proud of 
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Awsome!
I love this poem it isnt all dperessing and have no meaning like some of the other pomes on this site. keep up the great work! -
This was an awsome poem. so great! Keep up the great writes and i will try to read.
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wow!
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Awsome wrtie, it sounds so great. Luv it lots, and greatly written!
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Great write I love the flow, love at first sight. Excellent!! cheers for sharing and well done wishing you well, amy
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aww.........im in luv 2, i got poems boutl uv, check m out
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WOW!! what a great poem I enjoyed reading it so much and it was sooo emotional. Great piece of work. amazing artstic there is so many ways you can describe this piece, obviously you are a great writer so keep up the good work!!!! congradulations on the success of this poem
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wow !
wow , this is just such an amazing piece i love it ( sorry about the spellling ) lol , anyways , this is just such a beutiful poem , it's got to be one of my favs ! (defo) ok , i am off school at the moment (earache) so i am off to check out more of your work , i hope it's as good as this , oh yeah i will also check out your homepage while i'm at it ! bye for now , flo (candyflo)
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Beautiful work!!
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I wish I had thoughts like this that I could just jot!!! LOL
Wow, this is absolutely breath taking. This is so wonderfully inspiring, touches the soul and gives it a sense of complete serenity. What an amazing poet you are sir!!!!!
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Awesome
Wow, beautiful poem. These lines:
"my breath you take away
I find each note, divine you wrote,
that heals my yesterday"
Really spoke to me more than the rest. this was phenomenal, and I see I'm not the only one who thinks so
Romantic [I'm a hopeless romantic] and very sweet. We all have our angels- I'm glad yours flies by your side ::smiles::
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This is a really great poem. It touches me and I'd tell anyone to read it.
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I am definatly not a big fan of hope poems but this was beautiful. (I think you have placed a dash of happiness in my muse)Anyways, my faveorite part was the very creative rhyme scheme. i applauded
Thanks for sharing.
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Excellent Piece!
Now in my book, this is poetry, and all the love you have just fills this piece, and the way you wrote it, and it reads to me, well, it just springs up with love from within your sweet soul, and I thank you for sharing this wonderfully written piece with us all indeed it was, and is amazing!
Little Tim
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yes i am afraid i have to agree, i cant really see why this is so popular. although conventional, the structure worked well, but the content was just boring i think. and a couple of lines really didnt work. anyway, it is better than anything i could ever achieve. not worth an applaud though im afraid.
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This poem was very romatic. It was writen with such feeling, and it had great rythem. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job on making one of the most popular lists
Katie
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the best love of all is being loved for who you are.this is such a emotional piece.the words touch you in such a gentle way and holds so much wisdom.this is so sincere.that,to me always gives a write that someyhing extra.
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wow! this is so good. i love it so mcuh. it was very sweet and beautifully written! great job! always keep writing!
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Good!
I did enjoy this! Very touching! -
Timothy,
Lovely write was it to your wife?
She would love it Very tender and romantic if I ever marry hope my man can write words of poetry for me similer to how you do lovely my friend.
Hugs,Sherry
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ahhh yes. Where would we be without our angels? I have met a few of them here as well, my friend. The only problem is, I haven't quite figured out how to catch one. My butterfly net is too small and my fingers too slow. I tried dressing up a giant feather duster and playing some Cole Porter but all I got was a cross dresser in a wedding dress.
Excellent poem, my friend. This might possibly be my new favorite Poeticweaver piece.
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THIS IS SOO GOOD! I really mean it! There are no words to express it! You are a very talented poet. You express your words very well and I could feel everything through this! -
nice poem like it well trying to get the hang of this poetry cause im into short stories more then poems.
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Wow.... speachless. . . This is. . . I think fantastic is all I can come up w/! I love this.
Eny
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GOOD!!
This is a really good poem!! its amazing..i luv the last line...its really good!!..good job!
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Before you continue reading my comment it is quite critical and is not meant in any way offensive. If you do not wish to read a critical opinion and are sensitive please do not read below.
For the 7-8 points I accrue on the comment i will send this back to you by way of promoting it in the features box. I am doing this as I do not want to be accused of point manipulation, and also i care about honest critiques and poetry - good and not so good.
Very popular with the rest but not me I'm afraid. Line 3 makes no sense the whole poem relies upon rhyme over substance and its been done to death this theme and done better. Rhyming love with above is very cliched and i myself when i started writing did everything you've done here. The poems sweet but very unoriginal and the opening doesnt help as the thought of art falling from an angel in the sky seems like nonsense, How can this be possible with wings? do they draw with their toes?
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Oh, wow, that was just so...so....inspiring! Your rhyming scheme was simply beautiful and the way everything just...flowed. It's a masterpiece and I can't wait to read your other poems. I'm sure they're all as amazing as this one was. Please keep up the writing!
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wow....this is amazing i love the flow...it fits perfectly i really like the way you chose your words so that it all fits together nicely thanks for sharing
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awesome
Very wonderfully written...especially like this part:
Caressing me, with heavenly chords,
my breath you take away
I find each note, divine you wrote,
that heals my yesterday
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This is beautiful. Your images paints a beautiful picture in my mind. Awsome :-)
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sheer beauty..I enjoyed reading it
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Wow... so beautiful... just.. perfect.
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absoutly wonderful!! what a flawless piece you have written... It capitivated my heart..
Like melodies, that cry for hope,
and sing sweet poetry
I've been touched, with love so much,
for you love me for me
That last stanza is how I feel about my husband he is my angel that was sent to me.. Without him I am nothing.... he has saved my life... What a beautiful write
Jenn
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For just being thought Timothy they are quite soft and almost sensuous. You hsave a very interesting way of penning your thoughts. Reading you is like going for a float on a cloud across a beautifully, clear sky. Your words never fail to touch the softest recesses of my heart and soul. Another great poem by you. Thank you for sharing!
~Kimberly
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the last stanza doesn't fit right,or i guess the last line sounds like...i was hang and still longing to read the word next to it.
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And she cried tears of envy as joyous laughter sprang from her lips.
I feel very happy for you that love is a presence in your life and it makes you feel like this.Yet I envy you for that very reason.
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Great write. I really liked it. You have lots of talent. Great job!
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WOW! i am completely mesmerized.It was like a divine hymn , truly felt like heaven reading this. Its so pure and so beautifully written.
I love the rhyme and fluidity of this write..its brilliant.
my fav. lines:
Caressing me, with heavenly chords,
my breath you take away
I find each note, divine you wrote,
that heals my yesterday
great work.
thanks for sharing.
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Sweet and melodic like the drumming of a lovers heart. Such delicate wording you used to describe what is nearly an undescribable emotion. You minimized intensity of emotion to an understanding of words. Thank you for sharing such a gem. Truly a feast for the soul.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
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Oh my sweet Lord this is one of my favourite love songs by you
Ditto Miykie I second her applause this is a stunning heartfelt write
One of your best love songs
Oh holy lights you can write the music for this song of tender tears and love
Surely sent from heavenly love
I am overtaken in your last line
Yes I agree love is loving you for you
I send you a wild rose to your soul
So you know how I feel and love you so
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This poem is just like a song. everything is so well written, I am so jealous of you...but I just gotta say this; AWESOME POEM!! I just loved reading this. Keep up the great work.
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I love it!
This poem is just GORGEOUS, the words were incredible, every single thing about this was just plain GORGEOUS! man I sound weird but hey, its the truth. well done, this was amazing. -
awww...i have to say, this is one of the sweetest poems ive ever read! I felt so connnected with your words...its truly beautiful.
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Aww...this was very beautifully written. Congratulations on such a well written piece of poetry. Keep up the good writing and I wish you good luck on other pieces of poetry that you might decide to write in the near future.
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Loved the imagery you used, beautifully written. Well done.
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