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Double-Edged

Chaos is only another form of order, as hate is only another form of adoration.

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Written December 8th, 2004

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feel free to read any/all of the poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).


  • DryIce808
    December 14, 2004
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    interesting, for a one liner that had a true depth. I like it. Good job.


  • forgotten dream
    December 14, 2004
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    wow, this is fabulous. it's so true, and written so well. incredibly well done. best of luck in the contest <33


  • hole
    December 9, 2004
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    I've been reading through the enties to this contest and yours is definitely my favourite so far. what a true line and so beautifully written.
    nice work
    love Sophie
    Edited on Dec 09, 5:32 because ''.