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and the sun fades like my love has done so many times befo

and the sun fades like my love has done so many times befor

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Written December 8th, 2004

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  • TrentisGod
    December 9, 2004
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    so so true, makes you think about how many times this actually happens to someone unless they are lucky and only get a broken heart once or twice. great job!
    Emily


  • ICaughtFire
    December 9, 2004
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    Ahh. This can be so true. Not to be mean or anything, but I think you have a type-o. Befor, should be before? Just helping out..heh Sorry. But yes, I did enjoy this, and good luck. I thought this was beautiful because..I know it's happened to me.


  • hole
    December 9, 2004
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    this is a beautiful line, good luck with the contest
    love Sophie