and the room grows silent as the gun hits the floor?!?
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silence
Written December 8th, 2004
A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
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hey im tryen to find the contest but i cant find it ne where can u send me a link if u can thats great thanks
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Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you submit an entry or two!-Curtis Meyer
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puzzleness i guess i mean the person jus killed herself so its kinda in like i cant beleive they did it so like excitement well not excitment but shocked and questions why they did it at the same time
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Yeah, this is good but..What's with the "?!?" I mean, if there's a purpose for it, please explain and it'll settle fine with me..But if not then..I just don't get it, and it sorta bugs me. =/
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