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Magical Reindeer

eight tiny reindeer
deliver holiday cheer
magical night flight

red nose shines so bright
visibility zero
world wide excursion



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Written December 8th, 2004

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  • slick99
    August 28
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    so sweet, and cute... you should be proud Sandy... i bet you think my commenting on tons of your poems are annoying... but your poems are awesome, and they deserve to have a million comments!!! -slick99

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 17, 2004
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    Thank you so much, I am so glad your kids liked it too. They are the real critics Always nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy

  • Forms of Me
    December 17, 2004
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    This is so cute..as I would expect...
    I love it...my kids did as well.

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 16, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. It is appreciate. Terrific contest. Take care, Sandy

  • Insouciance
    December 16, 2004
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    Ooh, first haiku of the contest And damn well done, may I add. You use language that is very visual yet subtle. Rock on and good luck

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 15, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I do appreciate it. I am glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy
  • Antipodi
    December 15, 2004
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    REDGREENWHITE

    What a cute little ditty ..Lovely words and O so Pretty ...

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 15, 2004
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    Thank you again pattyann for another lovely comment. I am just learning to do haiku so I'm glad you liked it. Take care, Sandy

  • pattyann4500 gold member
    December 15, 2004
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    I understand that haiku is 5-7-5? If that's the case, yours are perfect. I like this very much. Hugs. Patricia

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 11, 2004
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    Thank you Cindy , I appreciate you nice comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy

  • Dove Moderators member
    December 11, 2004
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    Wouldn't that be a great excursion to go on.
    Even if Santa made me stay in the sleigh it
    would be an adventure like no other.
    I shoulda been a elf! lol
    Love the poem you did a great job penning this one.
    Cindy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you so much Rene. I appreciate it coming from a wonderful person and poet like you. I hope all is well with you. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Dec 11, 6:18 p.m. because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 9, 2004
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    Thank you so much Ann you are such a dear friend. Take care, Sandy

  • teardrop gold member
    December 9, 2004
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    I bet your house is just decorated so beautiful right now. I can just picture it.........ahhhh, yea, I feel so cozy right now....Great write Sandy!

    Rene'

  • December 8, 2004
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    Sandy, hehehehe, It must be fun at your house at Christmas! This is adorable! All the joy to you Sandy, I'm smiling, it's a wonderful write, you gotta win! Ann
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