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For the Newely Wed

Once you were young
Rebellious nature had filled your eyes
For only a day of happiness, you saw her inside
You loved the feeling and called it love
Expressed it by a ring with roses blessed with doves
For a hand of marriage, the time put within
You touched her heart, by each word said
Hope your life is with each day filled
To never let your soul be alone

Maria
Canada

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hope u guys live happily and yea...hope u all like the poem
Written December 8th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • As Autumn Falls
    December 8, 2004
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    I love this poem... especially since my sister was recently married. I love this!

    ~all 28~


  • Samplette gold member
    December 8, 2004
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    I am sure the Newlyweds will love this poem. THank yo so much for taking the time and entering my contest. It means a lot to me.
    Sam