Deep into my skin
My blade goes
Revealing a line of crimson
The numbness comes like a wave
Over throwing my body
Nearly knocking me down
But yet feeling so good
Making me want more
Making me do it again
Here comes the red
Here comes the wave of numbing hope
Im laying here in joy
Because I am numbing the hurt
I am numbing the loneliness
The anger
The heartache
Im numbing the emptiness I carry with me
But then it goes away
I want it back!
So I go and do it again
And again
And again
Author notes
Written December 8th, 2004
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very creepy, but i like the again and again part. It gives it more power and force.
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wow that was....kinda creepy 2 me. especially sence u wrote it on my bday.........
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I liked how you repeated the line:
So I go and do it again
And again
And again
I really liked tht. This was really good, so dark. I am in love with the title, numbing desire, awesome title for this piece, it suits it well. This is an incredible poem, it was very dark and at the same time I related to it which made it pretty cool. Great write, I hope you add another one soon, tht is if your computer isnt being crappy. -
I agree with Luv2Dust great write
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excellent
Awesome! you sound alot like me! keep up the great work! i will add you to my favorites so i can read more and more!Keep it up i'm gonna be checking!lexy
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