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Hurting

You are still hurting me
Why is that
Why is it that you just cant let me be
No, wait, why is it that I allowed myself to get hurt by you
I looked into your eyes over a year ago
And was fooled
I thought you would never do me wrong
I thought I would happy
But of course thats not how it was
You hurt me so much
But you dont even know it
And now you are hurting her
Its like that is the only thing you can do
Hurt people that trust you and think you will always be there for them
I hate you
But I hate myself more
One day I know you will know
How much pain you caused
How many tears have fallen
How many drops of blood escaped my wrist
You will always go on hurting me for the rest of my life
Maybe you wont be there physically doing
But whenever I will look down at my arm I'll remember
How much you hurt me

Author notes

yeah this is gona be my last poem for a while cuz of my damn computer that is a piece of shit
Written December 8th, 2004

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  • crimsonrain4854
    May 30, 2005
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    Awsome

    Its so powerful, I used to cut as well, thats just how i feel. You captured it beautiful. I look down at my wrist and like of what made me do it and how if i maybe did it again I would feel better. You put so much emotion into it. Its a very powerful poem, keep writting

  • heartatselfdestruct
    December 8, 2004
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    Oh wow Nicole. You know what, Im seriouslt gonna go up to IT and kik his ass for all the pain he puts you through. I hate to see him hurt you so much, and its not your fault you get hurt by him. This was a really good poem, filled with a lot of anger. You really let your emotions spill out in this poem. I especially liked the ending. Great write. And you can always go over to Kristens house and raid her compter Ok, not really, but it could happen. Anyways, I really enjoy reading your writes. They are always great to read, I especially liked this one in particular. It shows me a little how IT really make you feel. I hope all goes well for you even though I can see if it doesnt. Cya tomorrow.