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Dear Grandma

Dear Grandma,
           I write you this with black running down my face. The black I put on every morning to try to live up to your beautiful self. I miss you so bad Grandma. I really do, when you died I never thought that I could miss someone so crazy. Specially right now. Right now I am experiencing a very tough time in my life, and you know why. I just wish I could drive to your house and hug you like I always would, and I know everything would just be so much better. Yet I have no soul mate to hug, no place to sit and tell you my worries, no more Grandma. I Love You and I miss you dearly. I will forever live in your memory.

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God I miss her....
Written December 7th, 2004

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  • NoLuvNoChois
    December 8, 2004
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    awwe sweetie this is beautiful i love it. It is a wonderful and sweet write. it makes me think about my grandfather that i lost, and you know what, if it eases your mind, my grandfather was a wonderful guy and your grandmother sounds wonderful too, and they are both probably holding hands watching down on us both. this was wondeful. I love it.


  • shopgirl376
    December 7, 2004
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    this is very vulnerable


  • Aion
    December 7, 2004
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    Alright then. I'm not one to argue - I can't say what makes a poem.


  • Divine
    December 7, 2004
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    no, its a short poem, its a different sort of poem


  • Aion
    December 7, 2004
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    Did you mean to submit this as a story, hon?

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