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So beautiful

So beautiful is the one
Who looks down on me
With pity and love
That gives me Hope,
Hope to live another day

So beautiful is the one
Who sees my friend
Struggling to reach the Top
Maybe the love and pity will convince one
Sometime in their future.

Author notes

For all my friends at THS and everyone know I in Springtucky.
Written December 7th, 2004

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