I want the world to hear your whispering howl
To understand what i see inside your black soul
Marked by a red marker, to be unaccepted
To stand out of the crowd with many stained glares
Lie to fog all view of man kind
Selfish days stole all hearts, leaving you to suffer
For you wait for a moment of silence
Author notes
this means that no one understand this person i love...no one sees this person the way i do and no one hears what he has to say..he wants one day of silence to tell his story....
Written December 7th, 2004
A contest entry
- Dark, depressing, vampire, erotica, agony, whatever by SliptheFlitch.
300 points, ended December 16, 2004, 7 entries
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i liked this...very smooth flowing, very deep; strong emotion, and overall a great write
thanks for entering!!!
Jen
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great!
good poem, it was worded nicely, great job!! -
That is such a tough situation, really. That's the one reason I try my damnedest to not let my family know who I date...But when friends get in the way, too...It just sucks. I hope things get better for you.
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