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Do i look like an Eejit?

I always let you choose darling,

   Always my dress,
         
        Always my smile,

         Always how much blood i'd bleed.

Jump?

    I'd jump straight off that bridge for you.

why?

     I don't know.

             Because its you?

That's a stupid reason.

  And this is a stupid piece of poetrie.

 But it is because of you.

And that's why i cry.

    Tears are precious,

             And you're not worth mine.

  Or anybody Else's,

            Just your own vanity.

  They say you care.


      Since when has this been true?

 You're just another pretty Face darling.


                One to pitied,

                One that hurt,
           
    But you never learnt,

     that when you put your hand in the fire,

                      it burns,

           You like the look of the flame,

                  so you put it in again.

         god.

                You're so stupid.

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Hey Ryan this ones for you, dedicated to you, and is about you.
Written December 7th, 2004

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  • funeral
    December 7, 2004
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    wow! very powerful, sounds like a beautiful rant to his face, like in the movies when teh poerson whos ranting is then on the floor in tears...