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It was a crucial letdown
Unimportant to a moon’s ascent
At noon

 

Disappearing smiles painfully answer
Questions about leisurely debacles

 

As some people survive on white horses
Who are tortured, tired and hungry
For a rendezvous with decrease

 

Some dark horses ride free
Above suspicion

 

Better bittersweet ironies
Than safe in a cage
On a stage
Of hesitations

Author notes

On the pains of pleasures
Written December 7th, 2004

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  • HeavensChild
    June 22, 2006
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    Awsome


  • TheEnigmaOfLife
    December 7, 2004
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    Oooo ET you got my brain gears unrusted and chinking along again my dear! This really is a deeply rich metaphorical treasure in your already overflowing chest of gems! I love the way you think and the way you write those delicious and quite wise thoughts! This really is something to chew upon you know! Again ET you amaze, impress and provoke thought upon me my friend! BRAVO Par Excellence once again!

    ~Nikki~