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One Christmas Wish

Dr. Santa,
         I know that everyone has their one Christmas wish, all I want is to just be happy. Truly happy, no doubts about myself or life. I just want to live life and be here. I want to have someone to "have and to hold", but all of that comes with doubts. I want someone who will be brutally honest with me about a relationship. Talk about everything, be everything with me. Crazy, cool, weird, funky, gross, beautiful, everything.

All I want for Christmas... is this one small wish.

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This actually was inspired by a private xanga entry.
Written December 6th, 2004

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  • Neon Highway
    December 19, 2004
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    a really sensitive and beautiful poem


  • Vickie J
    December 6, 2004
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    I find this to be an honest, practical write. You worded it just right; simple and to the point. Good job.