Each nightmare leads me to those gates
Where you stood the last time i kissed you
Warning me that I'm not allowed
Wanting death more then anything
I love you and can't stand a second away
But those vicious dogs will feed on me
That doesn't stop my soul to reach you
But your death after mine, I can't handle
I want to hold you and never let go
I want to run free in the green grass, barefoot
I want life, but will receive death
Maybe one day my soul will escape with you
And forever, we will have escaped those gates
Author notes
3. I want love that is forbiden. It may be breaking your parents rules or somthing against your religion, I dont care give me love that cant be broken by rules
Written December 6th, 2004
A contest entry
- Favourite Poems by Kei-Aira.
300 points, ended February 2, 2005, 95 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a really good, heartfelt poem that shows strong feelings. I can understand your feelings here and I hope you get what you get. -
"I want life, but will receive death"
For the price of love is so high that one would give their own life, I understand your emotions
I know the hells you must walk to hold eternity
I hope you make it -
This is just a terific poem!
I love your wording in this poem! I can almost feel how you crave that love.
Thanks for entering in my contest!
life isn't worth this pain
~no1special~
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