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Early Morning Encounter

As predawn dew envelopes the slumbering world
She creeps softly eclipsing my dreaming state
Feeling delicate hands caress and explore
fingers trace the curvature of silken skin

Carefully disrobed and by her knowing movements
Heat radiates from her hand betwixt flushed thighs
Whispers as lullabies sweet upon the eager ear
morning shatters night as I near completion

As if by devine inspiration I am a changed person
Soiled memories of my past disapear before the light
Corruption's stench no longer holds to my body
I am again renewed as the first winter snow flake

Softest kiss upon my forehead signals the end
She recedes to a world not so far away from mine
My heart glows in knowledge she shall return anew
Changing my diapers so no one goes "ewww"




Author notes

OK perverts, this isn't about oral sex. I'm sure you tought so, shame on you! Dedicated to Dick and Blondie. And yes I like having "my diaper changed"
Written December 6th, 2004

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  • fallendreams
    December 12, 2004
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    Well, I have to admit I was guilty as charged. Nice twist to let everyone know that the gutter is a voluntary home for our minds. I gotta look for a new place. Wonderful write and enjoyable reading. Good luck with the diapers by the way.


  • AngelEyes323
    December 7, 2004
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    I'm sure "Dick" and "Blondie" will enjoy this immensely, whomever they may be

    Quite steamy! So much I nearly had to get the fire extinguisher, but the last line worked well in cooling me down LOL

    I know there must be many standing in line to change your diapers, but should they fail you, please let me know. I'll be more than happy to oblige

    ~Kathy


  • natasharv
    December 6, 2004
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    very good

    haha... definitely did not anticipate this particular ending... you did a good job of tricking us all :-).


  • ShaShay
    December 6, 2004
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    What a wonderful write. We mamas are like that, showing up at the right time and knowing when to leave...LOL...wish that was always the case. But I enjoyed the surprise.
    ~~~POO~~~

  • a-crazed-hobo
    December 6, 2004
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    I agree, your word choice makes this more emotional. Good job.

  • Kasheera
    December 6, 2004
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    Wow I love your choice of words..this is great...nice job!

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