I am here....can you feel me
breathing warmth into your small
heart....
I am here...touching your tiny hand
hoping for a reflex to soothe
me...
I am here......heart pounding
with adrenalin... praying silently
that someone can hear...
I am here....breathing again
till the next time.......
I am here...years on.. looking back
and thanking whoever was watching
over you....
Never letting you go....even though
the Angels came and left.. empty
handed......
You stand tall now....and I am small
and aged....you guard me well
as only a son will do for a mother............
Author notes
As a small baby my son would stop breathing and turn blue frequently...This is just to let him know that I never forgot the one who was watching over us ......
Written December 6th, 2004
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Great write. I love the angels.
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They watch over us all when we think no-one cares...thank you for your kidness
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Thank you
my apologies for the delay in replying 
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Wonderful
Aw! Very sweet poem! I love the picture too! Wonderful job! I love how the affection just radiates from your writing! Keep up the great work! -
No... not sad
It was written to show that hope plays a large part in our lives. My son is now 23 and thriving, so no, not sad but maybe a small miracle
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This was such a sad a touching story. I'm glad your son was ok and you were able to share such a lovely poem with us.
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Yes... it has to be the best of feelings to know that someone watches out for you
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very loving i enjoyed this very much
I no some one watchs over me and what a great feeling sometimes -
I am a great believer that when your time has come, you cant dodge the issue
My son is now 23 years old, so it was never his time Many thanks for your kind words
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Wow , this is such a sweet poem , its great , positive , of course its not positive about your son , but its brilliant to think we are all protected in some way , i believe what you saying , the poem is very effective and emotional , i like the kind of thankyou tone in the poem , its so love-filled , well done , great poem
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Many thanks Timothy Glad you enjoyed this poem...
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Awe Lynne. This is spoken straight from the soul in words only a parent and the guardian angels can truly understand. You should really think about printing this off and having it framed for him. Would be a nice Christmas gift
~Lyrical
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It's good to remember who helps you, and who you put your faith into! Great Write, thanks for sharing, much love!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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We are an emotional race at the best of times ...I fear We also put our thoughts into words.....(this has led to a whole mess of trouble ) I am glad you enjoyed this poem. It was something I meant to do for a long time...finally got it down
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Thank you Pheonix, I am glad you like it , thank you for your comments, they are appreciated
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You do very well at relating these personal stories Cutiepie.
It must be the Irish that permits so much feeling.
Thank you
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Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed it Many thanks for your kind words
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this is justly beautiful and full of love. it flowed nice and the spacing was a good addition and made this absolutly wonderful.
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oh my this is one of those miracles that proves there is someone or something watching over us protecting us. This piece was very good and i could tell it was a mother writting to there son the whole time awesome
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Thank you Monkey yes very true... we do have Guardian Angels that are never far from our sides
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Thank you
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Many thanks for your kinds words, they are appreciated
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great poem! everyone should remember they have guardian angels!!
great job.
chocolate
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Thank you . I am delighted that you enjoyed this, the picture I'm afraid I borrowed ......Many thanks for your comments, they are appreciated
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This is very very nice! I really enjoyed it. And like the flow and the picture at the top. Great job! ~ Trot
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This is lovely and so full of love, the way you spaced the words really added to it. Great write.
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Well Done!
I like the way this flows. The pause between the lst words in each is timed well, just enough to linger and then feed the last word in filling the pieces of the puzzle The emotion is protrayed well, having drawn me in immediately (which trust me is sometimes hard to do lol). All in all a beautiful piece and the artrwork is nice too Well done!
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