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To love

I am falling deeper
No holes to escape from
No words to stand in between
Your there right beside me
Holding me draining the life out
With only words to tear me apart
I melt by the touch of your soft lips
While our souls whisper the music of love
Those crystal blue eyes glitter in the sun

Author notes

this is about someone i like...I commented on My final goodbye and The way
Written December 6th, 2004

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  • artis
    December 8, 2004
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    crystal blue persuasion has got you locked in on his heart and awaits all the fruits of love abundant that your growing together offers over the many joyous days to come....Artis

  • slowlyhealing
    December 6, 2004
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    awesome! this makes me think of my bf... he has crystal blue eyes... they're so pretty! good luck in the contest!

  • GatheringStorm
    December 6, 2004
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    sweet

    very cute.. thanks for entering my contest
    Love Liz