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Madman's thoughts

Yeah, this is a kinda old one we had to do back freshman year, not to good but the easiest to start with. Wasn't a good day that day.

Madman's thoughts
Why go on and try to fight?
Nothing I do can ever be right
Struggling all your life for what
A sham of a life, Is that what its
all for?

I'm not good enough to be happy,
so why should i ever be.
Is my life even still worth living
even tho no one will ever miss me.

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Written December 6th, 2004

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  • Scarlett silver member
    December 10, 2004
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    Oh you silly goose, I would miss you!

    This is an interesting selection as your first item to post here, I might say.

    Still, I ejoyed it!

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